Poetry Month Day 22: Pooped pup

Dog is crashed beneath my feet
but of course, that’s only
after a long walk,
a nice fat meal
some whining
and then
plop

playplayplayplayplayplayplayDROP

Published by Lainie Levin

Mom of two, full-time teacher, wife, daughter, sister, friend, and holder of a very full plate

4 thoughts on “Poetry Month Day 22: Pooped pup

    1. I hit enter too soon. I also wanted to say I like how you crafted this, winding in down syllabically so there the reader is right there with that final *plop*.

      1. Thanks! Which is pretty much what she does – run and run and run until she just plops down wherever her body is, usually over someone’s feet!

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